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我们的印象中，一般认为英文字的音节要比中文长得多。一般的确如此，但有时候在英译中的歌词里，大白话中文句子的音节要做到跟大白话英文句子的音节相仿，还真不容易，还得诉诸于文言句式才行。 6park.com比如这个这首秘鲁民歌《山鹰之歌》(El Condor Pasa)，YouTube 一个视频里的大白话中文翻译，音节弄得很长，用中文唱会唱得嘴忙口乱。我的翻译音节跟原词接近，能唱得下，但显得有点文言式，有点文驺驺不接地气。 6park.com哪位翻译高手愿意试一下？来个信达雅的大白话翻译，并且可以唱得下。 6park.com唱 : Andy Williamshttps://youtu.be/wgon3N_ftyk
6park.com唱 : Simon & Garfunkelhttps://youtu.be/pey29CLID3I
6park.comEl Condor Pasa (If I Could)
《山鹰之歌》 6park.com曲 : Daniel Alomía Robles (1913)
based on traditional Andean music.
南美洲安地斯山歌
词 : Adapted by Simon & Garfunkel
谱 : •http://www.jianpuw.com/htm/yj/25693.htm 6park.com歌词：
(句子后面的数字为音节数 , 用来检查能不能用中文唱得顺口. ) 6park.com•———[1] (英文韵式 abab ; 中文韵式 abab)———• 6park.comI'd rather be a sparrow than a snail, (10)
我宁为雀鸟 , 不为虫豸 (9) 6park.comYes I would, if I could, I surely would. (10)
我宁愿 , 若我能 , 我肯定愿. (10) 6park.comI'd rather be a hammer than a nail, (10)
我宁作锤子 , 不作钉子 (9) 6park.comYes I would, if I only could, I surely would. (12)
我宁愿 , 只要我能 , 我肯定愿. (11) 6park.com•———[2] (英文韵式 abcc ; 中文韵式 abab)———• 6park.comAway, I'd rather sail away, (8)
远离.. 我不如远离 , (7) 6park.comLike a swan that's here and gone. (7)
像只雁 , 来去任凭. (7) 6park.comA man gets tied up to the ground, (8)
人啊.. 若被缚于地 , (7) 6park.comHe gives the world his saddest sound, his saddest sound. (12)
他会对天发出悲鸣.. 最悲的鸣. (12) 6park.com•———[3] (英文韵式 abab ; 中文韵式 abcb)———• 6park.comI'd rather be a forest than a street, (10)
我宁为森林 , 不为街径 (9) 6park.comYes I would, if I could, I surely would. (10)
我宁愿 , 若我能 , 我肯定愿. (10) 6park.comI'd rather feel the earth beneath my feet, (10)
我宁愿感受 脚下的泥 (9) 6park.comYes I would, if I only could, I surely would. (12)
我宁愿 , 只要我能 , 我肯定愿. (11) 6park.com 6park.com翻译：
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•==================================• 6park.comEl Cóndor Pasa :
西班牙语意为“山鹰关隘” 6park.comEl Cóndor Pasa, pronounced [ el ˈkondoɾ pasa ], Spanish for "The Condor Passes", is an orchestral musical piece from the zarzuela El Cóndor Pasa by the Peruvian composer Daniel Alomía Robles, written in 1913 and based on traditional Andean music, specifically folk music from Peru. 6park.comSince then, it has been estimated that around the world, more than 4000 versions of the melody have been produced, along with 300 sets of lyrics. In 2004, Peru declared this song as part of the national cultural heritage. This song is now considered the second national anthem of Peru. 6park.comIt is the best-known Peruvian song in the English-speaking world due to a 1970 cover by Simon & Garfunkel on their “Bridge Over Troubled Water” album. Their version is called "El Cóndor Pasa (If I Could)". 6park.comhttps://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/El_C%C3%B3ndor_Pasa_(song)
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