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===== 孙艺琪 ===== 6park.com《酒醉的蝴蝶》 A Drunken Butterfly 6park.com词 : 刘海东 (Lyrics : Liu Haidong) 曲 : 刘海东 (Music : Liu Haidong) 谱 : •http://www.jianpuw.com/htm/ky/538801.htm 6park.comLyrics： (Revised translation with singability in mind.) 6park.com•——[ Stanzas 1, 5 ] (Rhyme : abaa)——• 6park.com怎么也飞不出 Can't fly out as I try, 6park.com花花的世界 This world of flowers. 6park.com原来我是一只 I am but, just realized, 6park.com酒醉的蝴蝶 A drunken butterfly. 6park.com•——[ Stanzas 2, 6 ] (Rhyme : abcb)——• 6park.com你的那一句誓约 That word of promise from you, 6park.com来得轻描又淡写 Sounds so casual and so light. 6park.com却要换我这一生 Try to bind me with the knot 6park.com再也解不开的结 I can't untie in this life. 6park.com•——[ Stanzas 3, 7, 9 ] (Rhyme : aabb)——• 6park.com春去镜前花 Spring flowers in mirror, 6park.com秋来水中月 Autumn moon in water. 6park.com原来我就是那一只 So unreal. I'm but, just realized, 6park.com酒醉的蝴蝶 That drunken butterfly. 6park.com•——[ Stanzas 4, 8, 10 ] (Rhyme : aabb)——• 6park.com花开花时节 Flowers bloom and wither, 6park.com月落月圆缺 The moon wanes and wexes. 6park.com原来我就是那一只 Nothing stays. I'm but, just realized, 6park.com酒醉的蝴蝶 That drunken butterfly. 6park.com 6park.comRevised 2021-07-26 •==================================• 6park.comSuggested English syllable allocation in the sentence corresponding to the Chinese version is noted below. Number at the end of a sentence denotes syllable count. I keep it close to the original such that it may be sung in the translated verse. 6park.comLyrics： 6park.com•——————[ Stanzas 1, 5 ]——————• 6park.com怎么也 - 飞不出 (6) Can't fly out - as I try, (6) 6park.com花花的世界 (5) This world of flowers. (5) 6park.com原来我 - 是一只 (6) I am but, - just realized, (6) 6park.com酒醉 - 的蝴蝶 (5) A drunken - butterfly. (6) 6park.com•——————[ Stanzas 2, 6 ]——————• 6park.com你的那 - 一句誓约 (7) That word of - promise from you, (7) 6park.com来得轻描 - 又淡写 (7) Sounds so casual - and so light. (7) 6park.com却要换我 - 这一生 (7) Try to bind me - with the knot (7) 6park.com再也解 - 不开的结 (7) I can't un - tie in this life. (7) 6park.com•——————[ Stanzas 3, 7, 9 ]——————• 6park.com春去 - 镜前花 (5) Spring flowers - in mirror, (6) 6park.com秋来 - 水中月 (5) Autumn moon - in water. (6) 6park.com原来我 - 就是 - 那一只 (8) So unreal. - I'm but, - just realized, (8) 6park.com酒醉的 - 蝴蝶 (5) That drunken - butterfly. (6) 6park.com•——————[ Stanzas 4, 8, 10 ]——————• 6park.com花开花 - 时节 (5) Flowers bloom - and wither, (6) 6park.com月落 - 月圆缺 (5) The moon - wanes and wexes. (6) 6park.com原来我 - 就是 - 那一只 (8) Nothing stays. - I'm but, - just realized, (8) 6park.com酒醉的 - 蝴蝶 (5) That drunken - butterfly. (6) 6park.com 6park.com•==================================• •======== Previous Translation ========• (早前的翻译, 音节数太长, 没注重可唱性.) 6park.com 《酒醉的蝴蝶》 The Intoxicated Butterfly 6park.com •———[ Stanzas 1, 3 ] (Rhyme : aaaa)————• 6park.com怎么也飞不出花花的世界 I couldn't fly out of this world of flowers however hard I tried, 6park.com原来我是一只酒醉的蝴蝶 I just realized that I'm an intoxicated butterfly. 6park.com你的那一句誓约来得轻描又淡写 Your promise came so casual and light, 6park.com却要换我这一生再也解不开的结 Trying to bind me with the knot that I could never untie in this life. 6park.com•———[ Stanzas 2, 4, 5 ] (Rhyme : abaa)———• 6park.com春去镜前花 , 秋来水中月 Surreal as flowers in the mirror, or moon in the water, 6park.com原来我就是那一只酒醉的蝴蝶 I just realized I'm that intoxicated butterfly. 6park.com花开花时节 , 月落月圆缺 Moon waxes and wanes, flowers blossom and wither, 6park.com原来我就是那一只酒醉的蝴蝶 I just realized I'm that intoxicated butterfly. 6park.com 6park.comTranslated by ck 2019-11-29 •==================================•
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