父母从孩子那可以学到更多东西
回答: 8月3日托福新政后首考回顾:听力仍是备考重点 由 icemessenger 于 2019-08-05 9:03
Do you agree or disagree with following statement: In modern days, parents can learn more from their children than children can learn from their parents. (2019/08/03) 6park.com 写作思路: 同意 6park.com我想大多数人都会选择「不同意」的角度来写,因为「不同意」会很好写,原文的说法太过绝对——你凭什么说父辈从孩子那学到的更多呢?我觉得有时候孩子从父母那也学到很多啊! 但我想选择「同意」的角度来写一写,因为我觉得很少会有人从这个角度去写,从这个角度去论述,也许会帮助更多人打开思路。 6park.com如果「同意」的话,该怎样去写呢?其实学习(learning)是个很大的范畴,家长和孩子学习哪方面呢?我们可以对学习这个概念进行拆分——拆分是托福写作中最常见的论证方式之一,我们在 托福独立写作006和 托福独立写作005中都用过拆分这种论证方式(对time和health进行了拆分)。 6park.com我们可以把学习(learning)拆分成: 学习创造性思维、学习用科技来提升工作效率和改善生活、学习时间管理 6park.com其中,创造性思维和科技改善工作与生活是新出现的逻辑链,在本文将会着重论述;而“时间管理”在最近两篇文章中已经反复使用,在本文中不再细致论述,如果诸位打不开思路,可以从“时间管理app” “番茄工作法”等现代方法入手,再返回“时间管理可以让人同等时间内做更多事情、能够让人劳逸结合、能让人更有动力奋斗”的旧有逻辑链 6park.com第一主题段: 学习创造性思维 逻辑链: 1 孩子比父母更加具有创造性思维,这一点值得父母学习→ 2 解释1 : 现在的孩子享受的教育条件更好,校内校外学到的东西更加丰富多彩,这些东西能够激发思维→ 3 解释2: 现在的孩子有更多时间和精力,能够探索和开发自己的兴趣和思维→ 4 学习创造思维的好处: 能够从新角度来思考问题,可以改善生活和工作 6park.com1 Parents should learn more from children about creative thinking, which would benefit the elder people in terms of life, work and many other areas. 2 Compared with the old generation in the past, kids enjoy much better educational resources today due to the improvement of living standard and family income, being able to learn many more things inside and outside school; all these things, academically or non- academically, could inspire their creative- thinking. 3 The relatively good living environment is another factor that empowers children with more time and energy to explore their own interests and develop their own thinking. 4 The first and foremost reason that parents should learn to master creativity from their offspring is that it could encourage people to think out of the box and resolve problems in new ways, thus being able to enhance life quality and better working efficiency. It would be a life- long asset, even if they fail to master, as long as they try to have command over this technique. 6park.com第二主体段: 学习用科技来提升效率和改善生活与工作 逻辑链: 1 孩子比父母更加擅长使用现代科技工具与设备,这一点值得父母学习→ 2 解释: 因特网的时代,人们的社交、工作、娱乐、学习都可以在智能手机上进行,而父母辈对科技工具与设备的使用,可能还停留在PC时代→ 3 学习高科技工具与设备能够很好的提升生活和工作品质: 通过娱乐释放压力、通过智能设备提升工作效率 6park.com1 Parents are also supposed to learn from their kids how to use modern technological gadgets and tools so as to improve their life, work and study. 2 The advent of the Internet age has made it possible to socialize, work, entertain and study over a portable smart device, while the elder generation might still stick to the personal computer or notebook to process job matters or play computer games; the former is convenient and efficient, while the latter inconvenient and inefficient. 3 Learning to utilize such tiny things, be it iPad, smart phone or any other equipment, would definitely help increase the quality of their daily life, the efficiency for their work and the ways of learning, since they can stay in touch with friends and colleagues anytime and anywhere, process E- mails and answerp work calls wherever and whenever they want, and study anything they truly have interest for in bed or on subway. It is for these benefits that parents should ask young people to teach them these things of modernity. 6park.com第三主体段:和孩子学习时间管理
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