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6park.com 6park.com初恋约妮成了我好朋友的新娘 6park.com万湖小舟 6park.com今天是七夕节，我们中国人的情人节。觉得应该有些表白，抓住机会。不然恋人就成了别人的新娘，后悔莫及。不是吗? 请看我翻译的这首美国乡村音乐歌曲 “Don't Cry, Joni”。 6park.com“Don't Cry, Joni”（或“Don't Cry Joni”）是一首由美国乡村音乐艺术家康威•特威蒂(Conway Twitty) 创作的歌曲。 他和他的女儿 Joni Lee 一起录制了这首歌，并于 1975 年 8 月将其作为专辑 The High Priest of Country Music 中的单曲发行。 该唱片在美国公告牌百强单曲榜上排名第 63。 6park.com西人浪漫。这首爱情歌曲的歌词直白，诙谐和风趣。歌词采用双行押韵即aabb的形式。如果直译成中文就失去了它的韵味。就像把中文的律诗译成英语没有了平仄一样。不同的语言各有千秋和特色。翻译只能了解大概，大多失去了原汁原味。加上翻译歌词在音节数上可能也有一定的要求，翻译不容易。只为是七夕节凑个趣，尝试一下，看能不能保持英语双行的原韵，比如，"door" 对应"朵"；"more" 对应"多"；"day" 对应"贴"；"say" 对应"蝶"。时间仓促，没来得及仔细推敲。祝大家七夕节快乐。 6park.com“Don't Cry, Joni” (约妮别哭) 6park.com翻译: 万湖小舟 6park.com(一) Joni was the girl who lived next door 约妮是住在邻居家的花朵 6park.comI've known her I guess 10 years or more 认识她大约已有10年之多 6park.comJoni wrote me a note one day 约妮一天给了我张纸贴 6park.comAnd this is what she had to say 她心里住着一只小蝴蝶 6park.com(二) Jimmy please say you'll wait for me 吉米请等我在时间的长堤 6park.comI'll grow up someday you'll see 某天我会长大让你着迷 6park.comSavin' all my kisses just for you 为你我保存了所有的初吻爱慕 6park.comSigned with love forever true 步入清澈爱河的长途 6park.com(三) Slowly I read her note once more 细读着她的纸条感慨良多 6park.comThen I went over to the house next door 决定去邻居家伶惜花朵 6park.comHer teardrops fell like rain that day 她的泪像那天的雨倾泻 6park.comWhen I told Joni what I had to say 当我说约妮不能和你相约 6park.com(四) 6park.comJoni, Joni, please don't cry 约妮，约妮莫哭呆 6park.comYou'll forget me by and by 你忘掉我会很快 6park.comYou're just fifteen I'm twenty two 我二十二，你才十五 6park.comJoni I just can't wait for you 约妮我若等你会很苦 6park.com(五) Soon I left our little home town 很快我离开了小城家乡 6park.comGot me a job and tried to settle down 得到工作充满定居的希望 6park.comBut her words kept haunting my memory 可她的话一直在我心中传递 6park.comThe words that Joni said to me 约妮的言语是那样的甜蜜 6park.com(六) Jimmy please say you'll wait for me 吉米请等我在时间的长堤 6park.comI'll grow up someday you'll see 某天我会长大让你着迷 6park.comSavin' all my kisses just for you 为你我保存了所有的初吻爱慕 6park.comSigned with love forever true 步入清澈爱河的长途 6park.com(七) I packed my clothes and I caught a plane 打好背包飞机上我兴奋难掩 6park.comI had to see Joni, I had to explain 去看约妮要当面和她畅谈 6park.comHow my heart was filled with her memory 告诉她我心里不能没有你 6park.comAnd ask my Joni if she'd marry me 向约妮求婚说出我的秘密 6park.com(八) I ran all the way to the house next door 我一路奔跑入邻居家落座 6park.comBut things weren't like they were before 然而时过境迁让我好难过 6park.comMy teardrops fell like rain that day 我的泪像那天的雨倾泻 6park.comWhen I heard what Joni had to say 当约妮说不能和我相约 6park.com(九) Jimmy Jimmy please don't cry 吉米，吉米莫哭呆 6park.comYou'll forget me by and by 你忘掉我会很快 6park.comIt's been five years since you've been gone 过去的五年是多么漫长 6park.comJimmy I married your best friend John. 我已是你好朋友约翰的新娘 6park.com贴主:万湖小舟于2021_08_14 22:24:42编辑评分完成：已经给 万湖小舟 加上 50 银元！
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